What an entry actually needs.
Most portfolio entries fail in the opening paragraph. Not because the writing is bad, but because the writing is interchangeable. Swap the couple’s names and it could describe any wedding on the studio’s feed. Garden venue. Soft palette. Heirloom florals. A mood, beautifully written, that doesn’t name a single decision the planner actually made.
A portfolio entry is not a description of the day. It’s an explanation of the day. The difference is the decision: the specific creative or logistical call you made that separates this wedding from the template it could have been.
The test of a portfolio entry
One sentence. Read the opener of any entry on your site. If someone who worked on the wedding can’t tell which specific choice you’re talking about, the opener is generic. If another planner couldn’t have published the same sentence with different photos, the opener is doing its job.
Press features describe a wedding. Portfolio entries explain one. One is written by an outsider looking at the photos. The other is written by the person who made the calls.
The load-bearing sentence of any entry looks like this: “We moved the ceremony to the terrace at the last minute because the original space felt too formal for this couple.” That’s a portfolio entry. Everything else (the florals, the palette, the vendor credits) supports it. It is not the sentence itself.
Note what the sentence contains. A decision (moving the ceremony). A reason (the couple didn’t fit the original space). A specificity that can only come from the planner (nobody else knew the couple felt that way). Those three things, decision, reason, specificity, are the anatomy of a portfolio opener. Find all three and the rest of the entry writes itself.
What this is not
- Not a mood paragraph. “Light streamed through the olive branches as Sophie and James said their vows” is a caption, not an entry.
- Not a timeline. “The day began with a first look at sunrise, followed by a ceremony at noon and reception under the stars” is a schedule.
- Not a vendor list in prose form. Your florist, photographer, and caterer belong in credits, not in the opening paragraph.
- Not a press pitch. If it reads like something a magazine editor would write about you, it’s not yours yet.